And all we hear are tolling bells
telling fortunes, wishing wells
well-wishers washed in pools of tears
all eyes and ears
all eyes and ears
Are turned towards the funeral
the heart has had its coronal*
as silence ends the reign of years
the sky rains tears
the sky rains tears
We listen at the close of day
for birdsong, as a lullaby
returns us to our mother earth
as at our birth
as at our birth
And we, when once that song is done
where wandering souls are welcomed home
hoping to see the stars at night
put out the light
put out the light
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*a nod to Wordsworth’s Ode: Intimations of Immortality from Recollections of Early Childhood
In Memoriam
E.S. 24.03.58 – 04.10.90
E.T. 04.10.24 – 20.09.14
A.F. 02.06.72 – 03.12.15
E.R. 21.04.26 – 08.09.22
A poignant memorial. I’m sorry for your losses, Ingrid.
Thank you, Merril – a difficult day yesterday, but I got through it!
You’re welcome. 💙 This time of year has a wistful, bittersweet quality even without that memory.
An echo to grief. Beautiful tribute. (K)
Thank you Kerfe.
Beautifully done Ingrid!
Thanks Kim!
Oh Ingrid this is such a beautiful tribute and sending you well wishes and love for your loss.
Thank you Cindy 🙏💖
A beautiful poem, Ingrid. “ telling fortunes, wishing wells
well-wishers washed in pools of tears
all eyes and ears
all eyes and ears” I love that. 👏👏👏
Thanks Jeff – I appreciate your words!
The repetitions in this reverberate deeply, sad and beautiful, both! 💓
Thanks Tricia 💕
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Your poem resounds like bells. ♥️
Thank you Barbara 🥰
How poignant and mesmerizing a poem, Ingrid! I love the layered emotion. <3
Thank you so much Jaya! ❤️
Captivating.🤩
Thank you!
This was an amazing poem…the sadness here tolls loud indeed!
A very moving tribute, Ingrid. <3 Beautiful thoughts and exquisite writing!
Thank you kindly, Cheryl! ❤️
While sadness may be at the forefront of this writing, it is quite an excellent read, Ingrid! The flow and rhythm of this is just marvelous.
Thank you so much, Susi – this means a lot to me 🙏
You are very welcome, Ingrid! <3
Ingrid, I just reread this gorgeous piece of yours, and I was wondering… may I share it as a REBLOG at some point?
<3
David
Of course you may, David – thank you! 😊
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