I.
Prickles under the skin:
stirring back to life
rebirth, awakening
Alleluia (alleluia)
Amen (amen).
II.
The path, precipitous
is a switchback staircase
its yawning emptiness
instils more awe
than the high crag.
III.
‘I lost a lot of blood on the table’
she said, ‘I was tabled,’
I said, ‘I was scheduled’
I said ‘no’:
I bleed, I dance.
IV.
Feathers, flowers and silk screens
all those curtain calls
you’re all about the light,
the lighting:
I embrace it all.
V.
Mother! I’m coming.
Mother! I’m staying behind.
Your parallel,
your storyteller
whispering the wind.
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A Cadralor for Easter
Gleam magazine has a call for submissions to Issue 6 at the moment (closing 30th April). Most cadralore they publish are a lot longer than the three-line stanza form I like to write, so I’m playing with stretching it to five-line stanzas. I’ve not submitted this, as perhaps it is more narrative than imagistic, and perhaps there isn’t enough disconnect between each stanza. But it is a poem of Easter, and of rebirth, nonetheless.
I haven’t had much time for either reading or writing on WordPress recently, as I am busy with editing and cover design for the latest EIF publication: Re-create and Celebrate by Cindy Georgakas. Watch this space for the cover reveal, and more exciting news about the book!
Happy Easter to all those who celebrate,
Ingrid
Happy Easter, Ingrid. A visceral write and that last stanza is so moving. Good luck with submissions and Cindy’s book. Looking forward to it. ❤️
Happy Easter, Punam, and many thanks! 💛
¡¡Exquisita!! Felices Pascuas de Resurrección Ingrid. Abrazos
muchísimas gracias 🙏
These are beautiful and I echo Punam, so visceral and moving, Ingrid❣️
Can’t wait to hear, good luck!
Excited we’re getting there❣️ Happy Easter to you and the boys! 💞
Thank you – I am excited too! Happy Easter Cindy 💛
You’re so welcome Ingrid! So happy to hear that! Thanks so much! It was a full day of celebration and fun! Hope for you too! 💗
Gorgeous this beautiful poem that echoes with the call and taste of spring! I am excited to learn more about the book too. ❣️
Thank you Layla 😊
Had to revisit your poem after a busy day of Easter festivities. A pleasure to read you again. Creative and unexpected with several standout phrases. Love this! 💗 Hope you had a wonderful Easter.
I’m glad you enjoyed this, Michele. I am having a wonderful Easter, and hope you are, too 💛
😊🌻💗
The last stanza in particular resonates with me.
Thank you Liz!
You’re welcome, Ingrid.
I love stanza 5 especially. (K)
Thank you Kerfe.
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Well,Ingrid, this works on my imagination – each stanza stand alone – the final, of everything – it does what poetry should, and your’s always, stays a while, and more – I don’t have the discipline to write to external form – or to write as one with another, as you with Nick – Archery in The UK – it really is quite something – I still figuring how on earth you two wrote this – enjoy this Easter Monday – today as a all days, a pleasure reading you.
Thank you so much for your kind words, Eric!
Very heart-touching poem, Ingrid. <3 I hope you enjoyed your Easter!
Thank you, Cheryl, I did! 😊
Beautiful and moving, Ingrid. I echo others with saying the final stanza was particularly poignant.
I hope you had a wonderful Easter and hope all is well.
Good luck with all your work!
Thank you, Merril, I have had a good but hectic Easter! I hope you have enjoyed family time at Passover 😊
You’re welcome, and thank you.
We did have some wonderful family time!