Today, I'm returning to my Work in Progress, my first novel, The Folks Across the River. Ken Rice has very kindly done a critique of the first chapter, with many editorial suggestions. Below you can find the result, which I think is a much more readable and tighter version of this chapter. You can compare... Continue Reading →
Back to the Fiction I: A Novel Approach
I admit that with the current Covid-19 situation, I've digressed a bit from the normal remit of my website with some 'factual' pieces (in as much as anyone's personal diary can be considered 'factual.') It's high time, then, that I returned to some experimental fiction, and as such I'm posting the opening section of my... Continue Reading →