At liberty
for the first time in my life:
free to just drive and drive
or dive into the sea;
to live without fear
no longer to care
how harshly you judge me.
At liberty
to stand alone
upon a mountain top:
I’ll stand beside you should you care
to join me
but I do not fear
to go my own way.
At liberty
for the first time in my life
but thatβs not quite the truth:
at liberty
for the first time since my youth
to see the world, run wild
skip lightly, lightly as
a carefree child.
Β© Experimentsinfiction 2020, All Rights Reserved
One from the archives…
I am revisiting this for #TopTweetTuesday over on Twitter, as my dVerse poet friend Kim of Writing in North Norfolk is hosting. I have spent last week over on the Dark Side with PMDD. It is now time to turn towards the light. I hope you enjoy this cheerful, positive and empowering poem for spring!
A happy return from the dark side, Ingrid. I love the idea of being able to βjust drive and drive or dive into the seaβ; the internal rhyme & repetition of the βiveβ sound, as well as the repetition of βat libertyβ, emphasise the freedom and joy. Oh, to be a carefree child!
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Thank you Kim, and good luck for today!
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Such a lovely feeling to have this freedom. I’m glad you’re feeling better!
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Thanks Merril – me too π
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Aah amazing as everπβ€οΈ
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Thank you Rishika π€
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well I’m skipping and hopping at your words of liberty and hip hip hooray you are out of PMDD hell!
uplifting and light!
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Thanks Cindy π€ itβs a good feeling π
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Oh Yay!!! π
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This is wonderful Ingrid. Sending you lots of love.
xoxo
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Thank you Gabriela! Sending love to you π€
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Thank you too Ingrid. I hope you guys are enjoying the spring.
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Yes it is beautiful πΈ hope you are too!
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Itβs a beautiful spring here too
πΈπΉ
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I pray your freedom from PMDD is lasting. Your poem expresses health and lightness.
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It will be cyclical until I find a longer-term solution, but I really appreciate the respite π
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I sure hope you find a long-term solution and that you can carry on without that painful burden each month. ππ»
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Thanks Michele, I will get there β€οΈ
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I loved every bit of this poem! I’m glad you are feeling better.
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Thank you π
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You’re welcome π
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So glad you are feeling better Ingrid! (K)
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Thank you Kerfe π
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Lovely poem, Ingrid! Hope you feel better soon! <3
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Thanks Cheryl, Iβm ok now β€οΈ
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