Time laps the shore of life, ripcurled, the tide
which pulls us under, washing over all
the sand, the land, the space, the race, the ride
and never fails to stand, nor make us fall.
We falter at the changes time brings on,
uncomprehend the lines etched on our skin;
the seasons dance their round, and we bemoan
the boundaries we’re forced to live within.
It is a prison all of our own making
the time, just like ourselves, illusory:
For flame, and tide and time, in our mistaking
seem concrete, lacking all fluidity
Yet see through time’s illusion and we find
a universal lens, to view the mind.
New Lyricist update
Submissions to our new magazine are coming in fast, but there is still plenty of time to submit. As you can see above, I’ve been practising my formal poetry and word-play. You don’t have to use a set form for your submission, but formal poetry is most certainly welcome. Next week, we will be bringing you some musical inspiration, so do stay tuned for that!
Team EIF
Beautiful, Ingrid! I especially like the first stanza with its assonance–lovely sounds!
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Thank you, Merril – I think that’s my favourite stanza too š
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You’re welcome, Ingrid! š
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I particularly appreciate the last stanza. I would love to break the bonds of time.
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Thank you, Liz. I find that meditation helps.
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You’re welcome, Ingrid. I’ve tried, but I’ve never been able to get the hang of meditation.
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Loving the powerful final stanza and the imagery that led up to it making it whole. ā£ļø
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Thank you so much, Layla!
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Ingrid, your sonnet beautifully captures the ebb and flow of time, weaving a poetic tapestry of life’s cyclical nature. The eloquent exploration of the illusion of time and the realization of a universal lens to view the mind is both thought-provoking and gracefully penned. A wonderful reflection on the intricacies of existence ~ wowzers!
~David
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Thank you so much for these kind words, David!
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I love a poems that make me think, and I love poems that make me sigh. This one did both.
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That’s great to hear, thank you so much!
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Beautifully penned and thought-provoking!
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Thank you so much š
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You’re welcome! :)
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Feels so fitting for the start of a new year. Beautiful crafting, Ingrid. ⨠Will check out your magazine link. šš»
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Thank you, Michele š
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The sonnet is a perfect form for contemplating time. As always, beautifully done. (K)
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Thank you Kerfe.
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beautifully written in traditional poetry indicative of the form, capturing the elements of the illusions of life in time and space so well. Good luck with your submissions. ā£ļø
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Thank you Cindy šā¤ļø
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Such a powerful piece
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Thank you kindly!
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