Travelling in the wilderness – #poetry #dVerse

Travelling in the wilderness
around Christianbury Crag
Kershope Forest
The Debatable Lands
Reiver Country:

Between Rowelltown
and Roadhead
the Black Lyne and the White Lyne meet
like a divining rod
to form the River Lyne.

To make your way through the forest
where I once heard the first cuckoo in spring
so many years ago
you must follow the yellow markers on the trees
if you’re not skilled with map and compass, much like me

you could so easily get lost
and yet I loved it
for that very reason
– isn’t that
a little bit (even a lot) like life?

We wander through it
without map or a guide
and search for our divining rods
or yellow markers
to show us the way

before we realise that the divine
in us is our peculiar guide:
there are no black and white lines
in our minds and for this I do think,
it’s wildest there.

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Featured Image: Photo © Oliver Dixon (cc-by-sa/2.0)

About this poem

Writen for dVerse Poetics: travels in the wild. Sarah is hosting, and has given us a choice of lines with which to title our poem, all taken from the book ‘Surfacing’ by Kathleen Jamie. The first line immediately appealed to me, and I went for a walk with it.

Though a managed forest, the Kershope forest on the border between Cumbria, Northumberland and Scotland, has the feel of a true wilderness to me. It was once home of the infamous Border Reivers, in the debatable lands between England and Scotland, where the border was remarkably fluid and farms were often plundered by this band of outlaws in this untamed land. Many Reiver names survive in and around my native Cumbria, and some have spread all over the world, and even made it to the Moon (Armstrong is a Reiver name). The word ‘bereaved’ comes from the same route as the word ‘Reiver:’ ‘to reive’ meant ‘to rob or to plunder,’ and often in the case of these Borderers they would plunder the lives of those whom they robbed.

As for the names of the two tributary streams flowing into the River Lyne – I just love them, I think there’s something Lynchian about a landscape containing both a ‘Black Lyne’ and a ‘White Lyne.’

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  1. I, too, savored the names in your poem and the yellow marks reminded me of a story told to me by a great uncle, who said his family traveled through the forests from Arkansas to Illinois by following the “two blaze” trail, the blazes being marks made with ax by Daniel Boone, a famous explorer of the new west many years ago.

  2. “the divine in us is our peculiar guide: there are no black and white lines in our minds and for this I do think, it’s wildest there.” I absolutely love, love this! 💝💝

  3. Wonderful post, Ingrid! This park seems like a magical place to walk. i love the last two verses that compare this wandering to our internal wandering, and agree that our minds are a wilder place to explore. <3

  4. Ok now those were some tonque twsiters, I was getting lost in just with the names of the forrest and the rivers and places and I agree with you.. skip the map and enjoy the journey.. nice poem! ❤️

    1. Haha, Cindy – I didn’t even think how these place names might look to someone who is not from the area 😅 maybe I should add an audio…because when I hear it in my head it makes sense 🤣

  5. WOW I loved the line “before we realise that the divine / in us is our peculiar guide” and we’ve chosen the same title :)) An amazing coincidence!

  6. Thanks for this, Ingrid. Reminded me so much of the Woden Walks that have slipped away this year. We never made it out to Cumbria (although I have good memories of time spent in Kielder & Bellingham – is that Cumbria?), but we certainly headed west from here, north, too. The countryside only becoming more… more! The bastle houses and the Reiver histories up around Haltwhistle and Tarset being of particular interest. Thanks again xo

    1. You’re most welcome! Kielder spans these Borderlands between Nothumberland, Cumbria and Scotland too. The Kershope forest kind of blends in to Kielder. I love the Lake District but this place is more bleak, barren and wild.

  7. ‘The Debatable Lands
    Reiver Country’

    Some of my family came from the Border area, the Forsyths. I don’t think they were raiders or reivers, however. I like the way you weave this towards us all being lost, to some degree, within ourselves, analogous if you like.

  8. This is the kind of wilderness I am more than happy to walk in, Ingrid. Rugged and beautiful with magical names. Although I live in the flatlands of Norfolk, I do love curvaceous landscapes with lots of trees. Cumbria is one of the places on my list to visit once we are allowed to roam free again. I enjoyed the background history and etymology in your notes. In your poem, I especially love ‘the Black Lyne and the White Lyne meet / like a divining rod’ and
    ‘We wander through it
    without map or a guide
    and search for our divining rods

    before we realise that the divine
    in us is our peculiar guide’.

  9. This was so very engaging Ingrid. I liked the trek you took me on, a fascinating journey. Not being overly rigid in our approach to life, being willing to wander full of wonder is for me the beauty of spontaneity that makes life rich

  10. I love “the divine in us is our peculiar guide” and the wildness within…………wonderful!

  11. This metaphor of life as an unguided walk is so true. There may be guideposts and indications of where to head, but reaching our goal is just as much about our perspective in getting there.

  12. This sounds like a wonderful wild area! A great poem with wonderful images and analogies…
    you could so easily get lost
    and yet I loved it
    for that very reason
    – isn’t that
    a little bit (even a lot) like life?

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