I’ve been doing a lot of suffering lately
though I often hear it said
life could
or should
be fun
‘Shouldawouldacoulda’
that’s what I say:
beautiful suffering
that’s the life for me;
the artists way.
Beautiful suffering,
like dying sunlight rays
over the mountains;
like the break of day
which almost splits itself apart with yearning,
but what’s sweeter than that
beautiful suffering
when you bleed
into the page
and make it sing?
Sharing with dVerse
Tonight, I am hosting Poetics, where I’m asking for poems which originate ‘from a place of pain,’ examining how that pain can transform us in some way for the better. We all have moments when we suffer, but we can learn from these moments: often they give depth, resonance and authenticity to our art.
The featured image is of the painting ‘Roots’ by Frida Kahlo, who suffered all her life from chronic pain, and often depicted this pain in her artwork in surreal and innovative ways.
The bar opens from 3pm EST: I hope to see you there!
I would really like to see the poems that people offer Ingrid. A subject close to my heart. Is this an online meeting that you have to join?
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Is this Lorraine? 😊 you have come through as anonymous! If you visit https://dversepoets.com/ in one hour, people will (hopefully) start linking their poems there…
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It is indeed Lorraine, Ingrid. I don’t know why I have come as Anonymous. Never mind though. Sadly, I can’t use the D’Verse site because of its colours. But never mind. Smiles.
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That is a shame! Sorry you can’t visit. If you want me to link a poem of yours up for others to read, I am happy to do that, just send me the link below.
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The links to the responses can be found here:
https://www.blenza.com/linkies/links.php?owner=dversepoets&postid=08Oct2021&meme=12476
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Thanks Ingrid. No but thankyou so much. I was most interested to read the poems of others. I hope it goes well.
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I’m so sorry you can’t, hopefully some of your favorite poets will write something and they will come up on your reader 🙏❤️
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I am in love with the thought this piece expresses, Ingrid! 😍
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Thank you so much, Jaya: as a lover of words I am glad this poem resonates! ❤️
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There’s just the faintest hint of optimism and renewal in your beautiful poem. I really like it.
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Thank you Misky, I did want to leave room for optimism!
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👍🏻
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Frida is a good example for your words. They mirror ach other. (K)
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A compliment indeed! Thank you Kerfe.
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Ingrid, this poem is not only gorgeous, but it truly speaks to me.
xoxo
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Thank you Gabriela, this means a lot to me 🙏❤️
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My pleasure Ingrid.
xoxo
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beautiful suffering
when you bleed
into the page
and make it sing?
This is wonderful Ingrid and your ending is so perfect! Yes, that is what is it like ☺️❤️
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Thank you Christine! I forgot to link up my own poem last night 🤦🏽♀️
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I wondered where you were and then saw you pop up last! Silly you ☺️💕
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I love the metaphor of the light in this, the struggle is real in nature and in humanity, but it’s all beautiful! 💗
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Indeed it is. Thank you Tricia 💕
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Indeed. Let it sing ….
Nice one
Much💜love
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Thanks Gillena ❤️
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Ingrid, your poem reminds me of the one Brendan wrote today. There has to be some good that comes out of it. The ink bled onto the page that sings.
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Thanks Lisa. It would be nice to reach a place where the suffering stops and you look bad, glad for everything it has taught you. I’m not sure if life works out that way, but maybe one day!
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Ingrid, your poem is exquisite! I don’t know if you enjoy reading your poems aloud .. I read yours aloud twice. The words beautiful falling on the air.
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Thank you Helen: I often read then aloud in my head 😅 I’m glad you enjoyed this!
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At a time in my life when I was feeling destroyed about a break-up, several of my friends pointed out that i took that pain and turned it into beautiful poems. That seemed pretty damn cool to me.
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And indeed it is! There is always some form of consolation.
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Playing devil’s advocate—isn’t it because poets are supposed to have a facility with words that they can write eloquently about suffering, and not because they are more sensitive than people are happier expressing themselves in other ways?
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I am sure poets aren’t the only sensitive people out there in the world! It just seems to me that many people are terribly insensitive to the suffering of others. Perhaps artists in general are more empathetic in nature, but I couldn’t be sure.
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I’m not sure either. Isn’t there a huge amount of ego involved too (think Picasso, Modigliani, Wordsworth himself) and insensitivity towards the people closest to them?
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I suppose it depends upon the individual. I think there is a lot of ego involved in artistry, but I doubt it lends much to the art itself!
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Sometimes I think there’s a lot of eyewash involved, a self-confidence that cons us into believing that it’s ‘art’. Sometimes it’s just clever pushiness.
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I think true art has an authenticity which has no need of cleverness or pushiness. That doesn’t mean true artist are never clever or pushy, of course!
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I agree. I was thinking of the best-selling novels (and poetry) that turn out to be not very good but the hype says they are, so they are.
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There are plenty of those, but they don’t normally stand the test of time. I pity those like Van Gogh or Emily Dickinson who die without ever having their talent recognised in their lifetime.
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Women rarely did. I know we keep being told that we write ‘because we have to’ and it doesn’t matter if nobody ever reads or buys what we create, but imho that’s bollocks. We need recognition of some kind, something that makes it worth the huge effort.
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Absolutely, even if it’s just a kind word here and there. Financial recognition would be wonderful 😅
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I think those ideas are tossed out by people who have a decent standard if living, a good job and don’t need the money. They like to think that nobody ever really minded starving in a garret.
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Yeah, it’s none too romantic!
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:)
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this is such a great poem dear Ingrid. We only know the sweet gifts when we know suffering. i Love the metaphor and strong sentiments here. LOVED Frida.. poor sweet thing💖🌷
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Thank you Cindy! I watched the movie the other day, very enjoyable 💕
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You’re so welcome.. Oh i haver to see it.!!!💖💖💖
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Recommended! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Great to know!!! I just watched a horror show Squid Games.. no redeeming qualities.. now I’m gonna try to sleep.. 😬 son inspired .. ugh
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My friends recommended that but I’m not sure I fancy it 😅
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Wow I’m trying to figure out the redeeming qualities… would love to know theirs thoughts ..🙇♀️
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I think I’ll take your word and give it a miss, thanks! 😄
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👍🏼 couldn’t agree more!
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Suffering without meaning is like dying drunk. The beauty comes in the transformation of suffering, and that is the shamanic work we are still about in our poems. How did the myth go, it’s when the nightingale’s beak presses to the tender flesh of the heart that the singing begins? Thanks for the D’Verse challenge –
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My pleasure, Brendan, thank you.
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You’ve articulated the life of a writer quite beautifully here.
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Thank you!
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“When you bleed onto the page and make it sing.” It could not be said better.
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Thank you Sherry. I know you do this often in your own poetry!
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Artists do have a great capacity to feel which undoubtedly leads to great suffering. Expression is our gift and savior. ✨ A beautiful poem, Ingrid, that reminds me of Kahlil Gibran’s poem, “A Tear and a Smile,” that I posted a few weeks ago.
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Thank you Michele: this is a beautiful compliment 😊❤️
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You deserve it! 💗
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💕🙏💕
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I’ve often felt this, that poets(and artists) are not meant to be happy too much, to lead an easy life, because the best ink is blood. Love the Frida at top.
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Thank you! Let’s hope we still manage to squeeze some happiness out…
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I believe some of my best writing has come out of pain. It hasn’t addressed me directly in a while, but it pokes me now and then. Sort of like, “Remember this, or this?”
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I think it is much better to experience pain from this perspective.
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I can’t pick out a favourite line, Ingrid. It is so touchingly beautiful. And that image goes so well with your words. ❤️
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Thank so you much! ❤️
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You are welcome. ❤️
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Ingrid,
Brilliant. I like the crescendo swell of your poem, as the singing commences and suffering transformed into art.
pax,
dora
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Thank you, Dora: I’m glad you picked up on the swell of the poem 😊
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You’re welcome, Ingrid. Great prompt by the way.
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Thank you 😊
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You made it sing!
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Thank you 🙏
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nailed it Ingrid, haunting nuances without too much detail.
First FK work I’ve ever seen that wasn’t a facial portrait … but its always her! She does do pain well, experience counts.
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Thank you Kate. I’ve found some relief from my pain recently, thank God!
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I am so glad to hear that, learning new strategies can help immensely!
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wow such beautiful suffering turning words to pages… win win
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Thank you!
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Pain can really be sublimated through poetry. I agree
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Thank you!
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Since we can’t avoid suffering, guess we might as well make it mean something
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We take from it what positives we can!
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This is a beautiful piece of poetry
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Thank you 🙏
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The beautiful pain… you express it so well, and Frida Kahlo is perfect illustration for that.
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Thank you Björn!
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Someone who has never written poetry fails to see the bloody footprints behind the smallest haiku! Thank you, Ingrid, for this poem. I like the expression”bleeding onto the page! :)
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A good observation, Cheryl! I am glad this spoke to you 😊
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First, that art is perfect and really thought provoking. The image’s meaning flows so perfectly to your stanzas. Love these lines: Beautiful suffering,
like dying sunlight rays
over the mountains;
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Thank you kindly, Rosema! (I hope I spelled you name right 🙏 if not, please excuse and correct me!)
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definitely okay, Ingrid. :)
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This Is wonderful, I have also suffered alot as well as many others and I’m sharing pieces of my story In order to promote universal healing this Is wonderful 💪
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Thank you 🙏
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Your very welcome I wish you healing peace love and prosperity 👑💪
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Thank you, I wish you the same!
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You most definitely do make the page sing Ingrid. And the blood and tears, totally worth it.
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Thank you, K. At least sometimes it feels that way!
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Wow! This is an exquisite poem! I hope that you are happy and well and not suffering, however.
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Thank you so much! I am sometimes happy, sometimes not, like everyone I suppose!
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