I long to be long
in your arms
in your hand-hold
my love
how I long to belong
I long to be bold
with your charms
measured tenfold
my love
how I long to be bold
I love to be loved
by your caresses blessed
how I love to be loved
my beloved
So I’m ending my song
with a kiss and a blessing
I wait
where I long to belong…
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Some word-play and a Sunday morning love song…
A lovely wordplay and a lovely song from Dame Joan …
Thank you Ivor – glad you enjoyed!
Beautiful.✨
Thank you Jude!
That’s a truly lovely poem Ingrid!
Thank you Kim 😊
It has the rhythm of a waltz. (K)
Anapestic? Maybe 😅
So beautiful .💕
Thank you Grace 🙏
My pleasure 💕
Perfect Sunday morning–delightful wordplay and beautiful song from Dame Joan Sutherland.
Glad you enjoyed, Merril, thank you!
You’re welcome, Ingrid!
A sweet melody in this dreamy write. The music perfectly captures the tone. 💞
Thank you Michele – I think I had the song in the back of my mind as I wrote 💖
You are welcome, Ingrid. A song in your heart and in your mind. 💞
Loving this lyrical piece and especially the title! Don’t we all long to belong . . . <3
I believe we do – thanks Jaya! ❤️
The days be short,
the nights be long.
But the thought
be strong.
x
Always
And all ways x
The pattern effects are amazing. Gorgeous write, Ingrid!
Thank you so much, Jeff!
love your word play and song Ingrid.. 💗
Thanks Cindy 💕
You’re so welcome Ingrid! 💗
This has such a warm vibe, the repetition really does wrap around me! 💝
Glad you like it, Tricia, thanks! 💕
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I love the rhythm of “I long to belong” It sounds as though it should be a song.
Thank you Deborah 🙏
Beautiful, Ingrid! You know I love your love poems. 💖
Thank you 😊
My pleasure. 😊