Love
I want to shelter deep within your heart
for I am part of you, as you of me:
there is no shelter when we are apart
Love
I want to shelter you within my arms
from a thousand thousand worldly cares
and harms
in silence, as we listen to the wind’s song
Child
nine moons I sheltered you beneath my breast,
I wrote these songs while you lay sleeping on my chest
I shelter you within this nest of redbrick
Child
I hear the wind sing with a mournful lullaby, while
we sleep in peacefully within the cyclops’ eye
of a storm from which there may well be no shelter
Only this:
Love
within my heart
Love
within my arms
Child
beneath my breast
Child
A lullaby
for peace, in love and hope we rest
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Written for earthweal
For this week’s challenge, Brendan asks us to write of shelter:
You can address any of these questions, or come up with any of your own:
- Where do you find shelter?
- How do you create shelter?
- Do you share your shelter, and how?
- What have your learned from our wild mother about shelter, nesting, dens?
- What is it to journey, finding only temporary shelter at day’s end?
- What does homelessness teach us about shelter, or the abandonment of homeland by the refugee or the yearning for homecoming by the prodigal?
- When does shelter become the greedy cloak of invisibility?
- How would you compose (or recompose) the Biblical manger scene depicting the birth of Christ?
- How are poems shelters?
- What does it mean to be “safe” and “sound”?
- What shelter can we offer others in this uprooting time? How do we spread the canopy?
Let’s construct an earthweal shelter!
Beautiful words, enchanting images and a most wonderful message. Lovely work indeed!
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Thank you kindly 🙏
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My pleasure Ingrid. All the best
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Lovely!
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Love is prayer, and this poem is its sanctuary. Can’t be held more tightly than this. Or loved more deeply or desperately.
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Deep and desperate is right!
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Gorgeously written, Ingrid !Child /A lullaby / for peace, in love and hope we rest “
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Thank you Virginia 🙏
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We shelter children, but more importantly, they shelter us. There is no love fiercer. (K)
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That’s true, Kerfe, thank you.
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This could be the best love poem I have ever read
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Thank you so much for this wonderful compliment!
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This is SO beautiful, Ingrid – the more so since shelter and safety are not a given any longer – so tenuous these peaceful lives we are living. Your poem expresses all the tenderness of love for partner and child. I love it.
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Thank you Sherry 🙏
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Beautiful expression of a love so profound! ❤️
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Thanks Punam ❤️
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You are welcome. 😊
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Such a beautiful sentiment and poem, Ingrid!
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Thank you Merril 😊
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What a lovely collection of ways to think about and experience shelter! I love the gentle emotion and feeling of safety I experience in these evocative words. <3
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I am glad you were moved by these words, Jaya, thank you!
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Ingrid, you have created a stunning response to a prompt that offered many possible directions. A most authentic, protective, and fierce love pouring from your lines. 💖
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I am glad you felt this, Michele, thank you 💕
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You are welcome. 💗
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Oh, Ingrid, this is so beautiful. Wonderfully created and expressed. Love and hope….we all need them, and need them even more today.
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Indeed we do Jeff! Thank you 🙏
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What a beautiful poem, even the way it’s been written alone, and then when it’s read, and then the message. Wonderful!
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So glad this spoke to you, Lamittan, thank you!
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Most welcome, Ingrid.
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Ingrid, I love this post about a mother sheltering her child. It is so beautiful and touching! <3 It brought back memories of becoming a new mother at age 19.
I had always thought of motherhood as something soft and sweet. Shortly after my daughter was born, I was standing in the kitchen looking out the screen door when the realization struck me like a bolt of lightning: I would gladly KILL anyone who tried to harm my child! Motherhood is a fierce emotion!
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It certainly is! Thank you for sharing that precious memory Cheryl ❤️
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What a lovely testament to the love between mother and child. I hope the homeless mothers and children of this earth find shelter in the love that binds them.
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So do I Suzanne 🙏
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When everything else is stripped away, that’s what we’re left with.
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Indeed
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Such a beautiful piece of heart and a mother’s love we can all relate to but not nearly express so beautifully. Excellent poem for the prompt!💖
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Thank you Cindy 💕
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You’re so welcome! 💖
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This is beautiful, Ingrid. You’ve woven a blanket of peace and love to keep out the cold that comes closer every day. Heartfelt and perfectly written.
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Thank you Hedgewitch!
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Beautiful heartfelt verses! The bond is strong. The opening lines a reader can embrace quickly. Love the photo
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Thank you so much!
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Yes! Yes, yes! So totally true to hold to love in the “cyclop’s eye” of the storm. Life is learning love. Bravo for expressing it!
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And thank you for the song.
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Pleasure!
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What else can we do? Thank you Susan 🙏
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It is beautifully written!
👏👏💯💯
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Thank you 🙏
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